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Beat boards are also known as script outlines. These things will help break down the main points of your story. Every action, redirection, or turning point of the story is considered a beat.
A great script should flow like a song; it has a specific pacing and something that plays with either the mind or the emotions. With this, dialogue should be an afterthought in your mind.
Think of dialogue as the icing on a cake or the sweet extras that help push the story forward. Dialogue should be optional but not necessary to create a solid story.
I want to challenge you to write out the entire script without adding any dialogue to the story. If you have a script written, go back to it and delete all the dialogue.
Re-read the entire script; if it doesn't flow without the dialogue, then you don't have a solid story.
On the contrary, if the script flows like a beautiful song, it is a solid masterpiece, and the dialogue is ready to be added back into the script.
Don't describe the action within the dialogue; instead, show it. Movies are meant to be seen and taken into a fantasy world; they shouldn't be a lecture.
For instance, Chad says to Emily - My new phone app is incredible. What if instead of saying this line, you show the app and reveal his expressions. This will help evoke an exciting emotion and allow the audience to feel empathy.
I have seen this happen in films over and over, where the writer writes the first draft and says it's time to film it. Don't be that guy.
Scripts are only fully finished once they come out of the editing room. So keep an open mind and allow others to help edit or advise on building a more solid script.
Don't shut down just because someone doesn't like your script; instead, come at it from another viewpoint and ask them; what would you do differently? This, in turn, will help create a more solid product.
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